Skill-Audit-Bericht

lw-case-studies Audit-Bericht.

The case layer - how to take a finished lyric apart and what three working lyricists say about their own habits (案例与拆解). A fixed twelve-row worksheet for dissecting any song, keyed to the library's own fields so every finding lands in a skill instead of staying an impression; the rule that a real lyric is read from the middle outward, not from the theme down; what Yao Qian, Zhang Li and Hong Yuan each say about opening lines, restraint, revision, rhyme width, colloquial versus literary diction and how much to leave the composer, plus the four places they openly disagree and how to pick a side; worked dissections of songs the sources analyse in full, including one song two of them discuss independently; and the failure patterns they name - flat, scattered, overlong, bland, blunt, bare, stuffed. Use when studying a lyric you admire, when you need a real example of a technique, when a draft feels wrong and you want a model to compare against, or when asked to critique a song. 案例、拆解、词评、作品分